I wish the author spent a little more time on these two together in the past. One of the last “dramatic incidents” was completely unnecessary and served as a plot device to add tension, but for me just did not work.Īlso adding some other things below that are slight spoilers (in red):įor one, we did not get enough back story on Banner and Jared to elicit the feelings and eventually the decision for her to cheat on an otherwise great man. The drama in this felt overdone and contrived. There was a lot of repeated information / thoughts throughout the story and within inner monologues that I feel should have been weeded out. It made the dialogue in many cases seem stilted, stiff, and unnatural. But there were a few things that kept me from fully enjoying this.įor one, a BIG pet peeve of mine with dialogue is when a character reiterates a fact or tidbit the person they are speaking to would already know, but it’s added in the conversation for the sake of the reader’s knowledge or to serve as a reminder of something that happened in a past book. I am most definitely looking forward to the books she has to come. The overall theme is something I think many will relate to and the steamy scenes were great. While Kennedy can write some INSANELY beautiful prose, I hate to admit this was not my favorite from her and I think the story was a bit all over the place. Block Shot (Hoops #2) By Kennedy Ryan – 2.5 Stars

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